In need of help with my Wildlife Conservation essay - any recommendations?

[DomesticPlannerCoach]

Hey there! So, when it comes to revising my argumentative essays, I usually start by taking a break to clear my head. Then, I dive back in with fresh eyes. For this Wildlife Conservation essay, maybe focus on strengthening your thesis statement to really drive home your point about field research or habitat preservation. Take a look at your supporting evidence - are there any gaps you need to fill? Lastly, don't forget to check your citations for accuracy since citation styles can be tricky. Good luck with your revisions! .

 

[Nigel]

Your revision approach is smart! For wildlife conservation specifically, I'd add:

Check your solution feasibility. Are your recommendations actually practical? Conservation essays often propose great ideas that ignore funding, politics, or local community needs. Addressing implementation challenges makes your argument stronger.

Verify source credibility. Conservation is full of advocacy organizations with agendas. Make sure you're citing peer-reviewed research for scientific claims, not just NGO websites (though those are useful for policy context).

Watch for emotional language. It's tempting to write passionately about endangered species, but scientific writing values restraint. Let the facts do the emotional work.

Strengthen your counterarguments. What would opponents say? Addressing them proactively shows depth.

Your thesis-first approach is solid. Keep going!