Matilda
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I just transferred from a community college to a big state university. At my CC, I was a star. Straight A's on every essay. I had the formula down: intro with thesis, three body paragraphs with topic sentences and evidence, conclusion that restates everything. It was like following a recipe. Bake at 350° for an A.
Now I'm in this upper-level sociology course. I wrote my first essay using my trusty formula. I got it back today with a C- and a comment that's been haunting me: "Competent structure, but where is YOUR voice? This reads like a textbook."
Voice? What voice? I'm writing about urban development policies. My voice sounds like a slightly confused 20-year-old, not an academic.
I went to office hours and my professor tried to explain it. She said I need to "take a stance" and "let my personality come through in my word choice." But every time I try to write something that sounds like me, it feels too casual. I wrote "the city's plan was a total flop" and then immediately deleted it because it sounded like a text message.
How do you find this magical "academic voice" that's supposedly yours? How do you sound smart AND like yourself at the same time? I feel like I have to unlearn everything that made me successful before. Any advice from people who've made this transition? I'm feeling really discouraged.
Now I'm in this upper-level sociology course. I wrote my first essay using my trusty formula. I got it back today with a C- and a comment that's been haunting me: "Competent structure, but where is YOUR voice? This reads like a textbook."
Voice? What voice? I'm writing about urban development policies. My voice sounds like a slightly confused 20-year-old, not an academic.
I went to office hours and my professor tried to explain it. She said I need to "take a stance" and "let my personality come through in my word choice." But every time I try to write something that sounds like me, it feels too casual. I wrote "the city's plan was a total flop" and then immediately deleted it because it sounded like a text message.
How do you find this magical "academic voice" that's supposedly yours? How do you sound smart AND like yourself at the same time? I feel like I have to unlearn everything that made me successful before. Any advice from people who've made this transition? I'm feeling really discouraged.
