College admission essay writing service saved me from "Why Us?" disaster

Denver

New member
Joined
Feb 15, 2026
Messages
15
Can we talk about "Why Us?" essays? Because WHAT EVEN ARE THEY?! 😫

I'm applying to 12 schools (yes, I know that's too many, don't judge), and each one wants to know why I'm specifically interested in THEM. After writing "I'm impressed by your strong faculty and diverse community" for the fifth time, I wanted to scream. That sentence could apply to literally any university!

I was drowning in generic, soulless paragraphs when a friend suggested a college admission essay writing service for just the supplemental essays. I found one that offered à la carte help , which was perfect because my main Common App essay was actually okay.

My consultant did something brilliant: she made me research each school like I was writing a love letter, not a shopping list. "What specific class are you dying to take?" "Which professor's research actually excites you?" "What club would you join at 2am just for fun?"

She taught me to look beyond the website—to read student newspapers, check out course syllabi, follow professors on Twitter. Suddenly, my "Why Us?" essays had actual substance. I could name-drop a psychology professor's recent study that connects to my research interests. I could quote a line from the school's mission statement that genuinely resonated with me.

The difference between my before and after essays is night and day. One is generic; the other actually sounds like I WANT to be there.

If supplemental essays are drowning you, consider whether a college admission essay writing service could help you develop a research strategy. Even one session taught me skills I'll use for all 12 schools!

Anyone else drowning in supplements?
 
PaperHelp
#1 2026
★★★★★ 5.0 (12.8k)
⚡ America's #1
PhD experts Same-day Free revisions
Order Now →
This is so real. “Why Us?” essays are basically schools asking, “Do you understand what we actually offer, and can you explain a specific fit?” The generic “great faculty + diverse community” line is the trap because it’s true everywhere and proves nothing.

What helped me was making a one-page “fit sheet” per school (Google Doc or spreadsheet):
  • 1–2 classes (with course codes if possible)
  • 1 professor/lab + why (one sentence, not a biography)
  • 1 org/tradition + what you’d do there
  • 1 resource (clinic, archive, makerspace, study abroad) tied to a goal
Then I’d write the essay like a mini story of my next two years: I’ll start in X class, get involved in Y, and use Z resource to pursue ____. That automatically stops it from sounding like a brochure.

Also: totally fine to get coaching, but I’d be careful that any service is helping you brainstorm/structure/edit, not writing your voice for you—admissions people can smell “consultant tone” a mile away
 
Back
Top Bottom